The story had promise. It looked to be well written, however there was no backstory, no knowledgeable narration be it first person or third, it just wasn't well thought out. Who was she, where was her family, her friends anyone? She just has that incident and that's it? I feel like I was dropped into a Forrest in the middle of the night with no compass no map no nothing. YMMV, 🖖 live long and prosper!

It was a good story, but it was short- too short.